Exposure as a Visual Metaphor- Works in Progress- Conor Wagner
Almost Black
Almost Grey
I really enjoy all of your pictures, especially the all black ones. I think your subjects are gloomy and work really well with the assignment. I also think the editing on the white pictures are strong. The only improvement I suggest is the grey pictures. I think they are good, but editing them differently (like the sharpness or texture maybe?) could make them even better. Overall great job!!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy all of these pictures! It's hard to tell what your subject matter is for most of these, which always makes the pictures compelling. The second picture in your almost black section is super mysterious and the fuzziness completes the picture. I like your almost grey pictures, but I wish they were a little bit cleaner and crisper. Maybe you can take a more clearer original pictures, or sharpen/edit them on Lightroom. I love both our your white pictures, the first one having that pattern on that object that is darker than everything else, making it almost all the white. And the branches in the last picture that are brown, meanwhile everything surrounding it is white. I do wish that these pictures were a bit crisper as well. I think overall just more time spent in Lightroom editing will improve all of these pictures, but you have a great foundation.
ReplyDeleteI think all of your pictures are really good! I especially like the first grey one and how the layers of the landscape work on top of each other. I think you could make some changes in the sharpness or clarity of the images to make them stronger, but other than that I like them a lot!
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